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Louder than the Day by ~CityOnAHill:iconCityOnAHill:

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opposites attract
apparently... they say.

silent is to loud
as day is to night
you are to me
as dark is to light.

but I cant be silent
of how i feel about you
ill shout it from the mountains
after all, wouldnt you?

yes, we are the opposite
but i dont really care
because love is what we have
and theres nothing opposite there.
©2007-2009 ~CityOnAHill
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I know it doesnt seem much like it has to do with silent night, but i realised when i thought silent night, i thought of the opposite, hence the title, loud as day.

i have a habit of writing with a very loose tie to the theme, so i hope this one is still okay!!

oh and it has COMPLETE relevence to my life right now!!!!!!

*dances with joy*

hope you like it

xox

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~Renegade-Hamster:iconRenegade-Hamster: Dec 26, 2007, 2:01:58 AM
"yes, we are the opposite
but i dont really care
because love is what we have
and theres nothing opposite there."

I like the last stanza. :)

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~CityOnAHill:iconCityOnAHill: Dec 26, 2007, 3:31:40 AM
thank you =] its so easy when you have inspiration!!

xo

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"but all i get to do
is fake a smile til bed,
roll over,
and cry myself to sleep"
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~Ragnarakk:iconRagnarakk: Dec 27, 2007, 11:42:16 PM
short and sweet, just the way i like it

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~CityOnAHill:iconCityOnAHill: Dec 28, 2007, 4:28:26 AM
lol yeh same, they can get a bit long sometimes :S

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"...Neither can a city on a hill be hidden."

"but all i get to do
is fake a smile til bed,
roll over,
and cry myself to sleep"
~foxshock55

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~Pola-444:iconPola-444: Dec 28, 2007, 12:54:59 PM
i like the third stanza..though it doesn't flow that well.. i like the meaning as well..

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~BeckyNutt92:iconBeckyNutt92: Dec 28, 2007, 1:09:34 PM
:aww: i love this poem, it's written nicely.:+fav:

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~something44:iconsomething44: Dec 28, 2007, 8:10:35 PM
The last stanza is amazing! I can really relate to it.

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~CityOnAHill:iconCityOnAHill: Dec 29, 2007, 12:04:59 AM
thank you! i wrote it in a bit of a rush, i was kind of excited because that piece moved me up a rank! i might try and re-word that bit though.

thank you!!

--
"...Neither can a city on a hill be hidden."

"but all i get to do
is fake a smile til bed,
roll over,
and cry myself to sleep"
~foxshock55

*RawEm0tion~Lex-Writers
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